dawn chorus

April 18, 2010 at 7:54 pm (Uncategorized)

the flutter of twittering breaks the day

the notebooks and iPhones calling

a cacophony of voices

dropping posts

into virtual boxes

following each other

in endless circles

of greetings and congratulations

enquiries and consolations

competing for attention

and paying no reciprocation

like the blackbird’s trill

demanding and self-important

you can’t begin without me.

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2 Comments

  1. Rachel Fox said,

    A good one.
    x

  2. crazyfieldmouse said,

    I keep changing the last line because I am not sure how to end it. suggestions always welcome
    thanks for the visit
    cfm

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